I’ll never tell you about her.
I’ll never tell you how she caught my attention by asking for my attention.
I’ll never tell about how she looked so cute and beautiful and amazing and wonderful and outrageous all at the same time when I first saw her, whenever I saw her, whenever I see her.
I’ll never tell you how my name never sounded the same after she said it.
I’ll never tell you of the songs that I could only sing because of her.
I’ll never write about the letters and the notes I sent her every day.
I’ll never show you the poems I wrote because of her.
I’ll never tell you about the heaven that she revealed to me.
I’ll never show you the universe that she opened for me.
I’ll never write about the paradise that she delivered me to.
I’ll never tell you about how she turned me into a god.
I’ll never tell you about how I immortalized her.
I’ll never tell you about how she tortured me.
I’ll never write about how she made me suffer.
I’ll never show you the letter that killed me.
I’ll never show how the ballads and lullabies turned into dirges and elegies.
I’ll never write how the light and the day turned into shadows and night.
I’ll never tell you how she destroyed the whole world.
I’ll never write about my loathing.
I’ll never write about my despair.
I’ll never write about my regrets.
I’ll never write about my hate.
I’ll never write about my pain.
I’ll never tell you that it hurts when I see her and the new guy.
I’ll never tell you that she hates that I hate her.
I’ll never tell you that she wants us to be friends.
I’ll never tell you about the confusion when she said that she misses my letters more (than me).
I’ll never tell you—or anyone else for that matter—that I still love her.
I’ll never tell.
Never.
Reblogged this on Nanuschka's Blog and commented:
A very moving take on today’s prompt by a fellow blogger
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VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN! I totally felt the emotion there. Stunning piece! Reblogged this one
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Thank you so much.
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Man, that is deep and intense.Incredible post.
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Thanks for thinking so.
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WoW! Excellent. Beautiful.
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Thanks!
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All I can say is wow, Wow, WOW. Sorry to be so redundant, but this post has left me at a loss for words . . . something that NEVER happens to me! (yet, something for which I’m very grateful)
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Thanks. Thanks so much!
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This almost made me cry. Awesome post.
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I try not to make people cry. Thank you for the compliment.
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Reblogged this on Hasta Que mi Corazón Explote… | Until my Heart Explodes… and commented:
Otra de las mejores piezas que encontré en el Daily Prompt de hoy. Intensa y sentimental.
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Great one!
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Thanks!
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Absolutely priceless….
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Thank you.
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😦 aw man!
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Yeah. Happens.
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Hey! Congrats for being Freshly Pressed! 😀 https://twitter.com/freshly_pressed/status/342687842696318976
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Thank you.
That came as a big surprise this morning.
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How intense and inspiring. Was this hard to write?
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It was difficult to pick.
I had other answers to the Daily Prompt but this one tears me apart in ways that the others cannot.
It’s a blur that I see clearly and a clarity that’s blurred.
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Thanks for your comment. I hope you have a nice day. http://www.segmation.wordpress.com
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It always hurts when the people we love the most end up betraying us. I wish you luck in healing and I hope you find someone who will love you and appreciate you as you deserve.
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Thank you for the blessing and the beautiful thoughts.
And may you be blessed as well.
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Thank you, and from your mouth to God’s Ears I hope both our blessings go.
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Reblogged this on Memento Mori and commented:
Sometimes, other people find the words you never could.
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Stunning piece of writing.
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Thank you so much.
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WOW
Sometimes somethings leave you speechless,
Thats because all compliments would prove less.
I’ve two words for you,
and they are not ‘move on’.
They are ‘Keep Writing’,
so that I can keep reading.
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Thank you for your words.
I shall do my best to keep at it.
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awww…another heartbreak…i so hate it…. and its best to not tell as you will grieve more…i am sending you my prayers and wishes and i hope, infact am sure, a very deserving love will sought u soon. good luck and wishes. you have so much pain and power in your words….thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for blessing me.
I pray that you too be blessed.
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That was something else. I would love to hear more, or actually see you put some of these where people could see them like poetry competitions, you would definately win, keep up the good work <3.
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I never thought of that before.
Thanks for the idea and the compliment.
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This is really something one can relate to, and still it is so personal! SuperB
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I’m glad you think so.
Thank you.
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I can completely relate to this. That gutted feeling you get when you realize the trust you placed in another was misplaced.
You can move on, but the scars don’t fade.
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Yes, I believe that even if I move away and move on, the scars will be with me wherever I am.
Experiences like this are not baggage–more like passport stamps.
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Very true. Baggage can be put down or abandoned. The stamp can’t come out of the passport once it’s in there.
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Stirred my heart.
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Thanks, I guess.
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Such a wonderfully moving poem. It definitely reminded me of all my heartaches, but I never would have put it so well.
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Our own experiences will move us, one way or another.
Thank you for the compliment.
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Reblogged this on 1WriteWay and commented:
A very moving poem about lost love.
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What a powerful poem. I’m sorry for your loss. Relationships can be brutal sometimes 😦
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Yes, yes they can be brutal.
But sometimes it is only through force that you learn.
Thank you.
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I know exactly how you feel. EXACTLY how you feel.
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Thank you for commiserating.
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Reblogged this on samsonovs.
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wow – I am without words, other than wow. 🙂
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Thank you, I believe.
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Congratulations on being Freshly Pressed! I am so happy for you!
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And thank you for sharing this with me.
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This is great. I saw it yesterday and re read it today, it’s still just as enjoyable. Congrats on the fresh press!
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Cool! Glad you liked it.
Thank you for the compliment.
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An emotional phase of love, scripted into the poem in a hypnotic way. Very well thought, and even better written. The depth in each and every word shows the perfect picture of love. Great work : )
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What a wonderful description of it.
Thank you so much!
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Wow! Makes a hug an absolute necessity *hug*
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Thanks for the virtual hug.
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Just amazing.
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I’m glad that you think so.
Thank you.
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I really do think so. So well written and deep, those are emotions, and words that I am sure everyone has felt. I really enjoying reading it, thank you for sharing and I plan to work my way through your site to see more.
🙂
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Wow. Once again, thank you for inspiring me.
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Lovely and heartbreaking and real. Cheers on being Freshly Pressed and moving forward!
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Thank you.
And yes to moving forward!
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Wow. This is outstanding.
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Thank you so much.
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This is absolutely amazing and powerfully written
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Thanks for that.
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That was really beautiful! Congratulations on being Freshly Pressed!
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It’s quite an honor.
Thank you.
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Lovely and sadness.
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I believe it is.
Thank you.
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Reblogged this on SassyTeen368 Blog😃😉😄😘 and commented:
Love this
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Reblogged this on ladouleurexquise8 and commented:
Nice piece
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Beautifully written, thanks for sharing.
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And thank you for reading!
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Oh wow, this is powerful. I felt real emotion, I felt real sadness. I felt as though my heart was breaking all over again. The darkness of love, I felt it.
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I believe I underestimated my own work.
I hope you’re okay.
Thanks by the way.
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That’s so hard when that happens … and yes I’ll never tell either
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Yes, yes it is hard when it happens.
Hard still when you remember it happened.
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from sadness, happy memories emerge. Thank you for sharing this post.
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I too believe that.
Thank you for reading.
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Absurdly good. The kind of good that make a writer jealous for not having written it.
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Keep writing.
You’ll make it.
And thank you.
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Isn’t it wonderful to be able to release by writing-it-out? I’m hopeful that one day you’ll be over the sadness, learn the lesson intended from the “experience” , and be ready to move forward. Or you may already be there..I can relate to these thoughts you’ve shared. Long ago I loved someone so deeply..Someone I didn’t dream was even capable of making me heartsick. But years later(took me a while) I grew from that experience. And I cherish what was so very, very good while it was good. Stay UPlifted & blessed!
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Yes, yes it wonderful to write it out.
I would like to believe I’m getting closer to that.
Thank you and may you too be blessed!
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Very captivating. WOW.
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Thank you so much.
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Very powerful.
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Thanks!
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If you’ve never read Neruda’s, Tonight I Write the Saddest Lines, Google it. Your sentiments and his are similar in some ways.
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I never read it myself but I heard a friend mention the title many times before.
And it’s only now that I remember it because of you. Thanks!
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Finally, you should never write this post again. Because if you do it, you do it twice. Sorry, just kidding 🙂
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I’d like to believe I won’t.
And I shall do my best not to.
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Reblogged this on art of living and commented:
wonderful piece.
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Beautiful, heartbreaking and most of all, I hope it one day becomes bittersweet.
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I believe it’s on its way there.
Thank you.
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Reblogged this on acehbarat0's Blog.
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Almost made me cry…. Really deep
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I hate making people cry.
Thank you though.
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I wonder if I will make anyone feel that for me? The happy bits, mind you.
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I’m not gifted with prophetic sight but I’d like to believe that you will.
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Thank you for your words of encouragement! That energy is better out there in the universe! Yeah for the happy bits!
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Awesome poem. You ever thought about taking your blogs mobile? It would definitely get you more traffic! How to Mobilize Your WordPress Website
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Not really. I just do this when I’m at home.
Thanks though.
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Writting comes within the deeps and depth of the night. And this was deep like the same your able to name your own price for theThe Double Down Mac Bundle/a>
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Beaoootiful! By itself it would be a very intense piece of writing, tagged as it is to a daily prompt, it gets more elevated!
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That did not occur to me.
Thank you for pointing that out.
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I can feel your deepest cut, man…well said..will reblog this. Stay strong, okay..:)
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I shall do my very best.
Thank you for the compliment.
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Reblogged this on Des Millions Des Roses and commented:
#sad love #broken heart
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sadness beautified………..!!!
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Thank you.
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Wow! I loved it!
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And I’m glad you did.
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You are so brilliant! I’m looking forward for more of your posts/blogs 🙂
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You’re too kind.
Thank you.
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Impressive. She’s missing out.
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Thanks.
I guess. But she has made up her mind.
And she’s happy now where she is.
Which is good.
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No no I’m saying that you sound like a good guy and she’s missed out. You’ll be alright, and you’ll find someone real…and equally invested in you.
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Wow. Thank you.
That was really nice of you to say that.
Thanks!
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This is fantastic. What a wonderful writer you are. Thank you for posting it. Take it from a slightly less cruel version of ‘Her,’ she probably knows deep down exactly what she has done. Congratulations on being Freshly Pressed!
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Thank you for that.
I’d like to believe that she does.
But I don’t she’d allow me to know.
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This was so beautiful… I can relate completely… It made me cry. Thank-you for sharing this.
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My sincerest apologies.
I do not like making people cry.
I did not set out with that goal in mind.
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The fact that I cried shows the intensity of those words and the feelings and emotions put into it! It really evokes the senses! It’s beautiful!
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Your words are very reassuring.
Thank you so much.
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No… Thank-YOU for making me have an incredible day 🙂 Very powerful. It reminded me of how much strength I gained from my gained along the way 🙂
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Reblogged this on Deep Inside Souls.
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Sublime.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful post!
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Thanks so much.
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Beautifully open
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Thanks!
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Intimacies strung in memories between two souls, aches that exist silently in thoughts unspoken. Lovely.
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That was beautiful.
Thank you.
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You never told me about those things, huh? Hehe! Great post! ❤
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Thank you.
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welcome Kuya. ❤
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Reblogged this on HuntressHearts and commented:
This is it.
There are times that you don’t want to say or tell people about anything, but you just can’t control the words that you want to express. 🙂
— LH
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Very powerful, I felt a lot of emotion while reading this piece.
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I guess that’s good.
Thank you.
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It’s like day, then night. But beware: day’ll be back again.
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I too believe so.
Thank you.
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Beautiful and stunning writing.
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Thank you so much.
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Lovely piece of emotional turmoil, ever thought of putting it into music…Would make a great song…It helps the grief of lost love…The best love poems have been inspired by broken hearts.
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Not until you mentioned it.
I believe that’s a good idea.
Thank you for that.
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hello all
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Hello.
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Damn. Yeah, I totally understand this feeling, even though I haven’t been “in love” for a long time now. I think falling in love is foolish, irrational and a total waste of time – you build your beloved up in your mind into a perfect, angelic being, which is simply pure fantasy. You’re just setting yourself up for hurt and disappointment.
But it still happens, even against our will, doesn’t it?
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Yes, yes it does.
Try as you may, you could never dictate anything to your own heart.
It will love and hate who it wants.
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What a powerful statement. It strikes such a chord in me and reminds me of the force that life has to give and take away. Incredible.
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That was quite insightful.
Thank you.
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Well said sir.
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Thank you.
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Reblogged this on Soul Trips and commented:
This is wow! Awesome work.
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I can relate…this is devastatingly beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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On reading this, I must say I have an insight into this. It took me five years before I’d date (trust anyone) again after a girlfriend such as this.
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We heal in our time.
And I believe that it’s good that you got out there again.
Good luck!
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Thank you, but I don’t need the luck! I’ve already been lucky! Sorry that sounded a lot dirtier than I intended. What I meant is that I met my wife after that five years. She’s the first one I trusted after that!!!
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Wow! Good for you. You indeed are lucky. May your marriage and household be blessed.
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Very good 🙂
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Thank you.
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Your welcome
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Reblogged this on all around this world , funs,news….
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I felt every line of this one! Thanks for “not telling” us. 😉 Maybe someday I’ll “not tell” the same story. Love bites.
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Thank you.
If ever you decide, may you find the words.
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I’m sorry this happened to you and I love how you’ve written about it. Learn from it and move on…. do not repeat with someone new! Make it a once in a lifetime…. Keep writing though!
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Thank you.
I am on my way from that point.
And I shall do my best not to let it happen again.
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Reblogged this on GoStepAway and commented:
But I want tell him…
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Reblogged this on tuitoek.
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Sensational.
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Thank you.
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I am trying to say something witty but unfortunately the only word that is coming out of my mouth after reading this is wow. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
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And thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
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Incredible. I just ventured into your blog and I must say, your style is going to ensure that I’m back very soon!
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Cool.
Well, I hope you do.
Thanks so much.
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Reblogged this on Flying, but Afraid of Falling and commented:
Wow, absolutely beautifully written. I can’t tell you how real this makes me feel, having dealt with the same emotions recently. Please continue your expressions.
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lovely! Something I can relate to, beautifully written 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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You’re an excellent writer if I say so myself! Keep up the great work!
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I shall do my best.
Thanks so much.
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I’ll never tell u it’s beautiful .. :-).
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And I’ll never tell you I like your comment. 🙂
Thank you.
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Oh matiserrano, you put my life on paper. How I know what you feel! You are very talented, thank you! I read what I needed to read today.
Best of luck!
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Wow. Cool. I’m glad it helped you.
And thank you so much for your words.
Best of luck to you too!
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Beautiful. Your words evoke so much emotion! No wonder you were featured on Freshly Pressed…
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Frankly, it did not dawn on me that it contained such until people told me. And–to this day–I still find it unbelievable.
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Reblogged this on RussDOMED.
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Great piece.!!!!!(:
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Thank you.
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Welcome!
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Love it! Very pained. From experience I will say over time the hate turns to a low boiling love on simmer, and someone else will get your water boiling, someone so worth it xoxo
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Interesting way of putting it.
Thank you!
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This is so moving….I can really feel the emotion.
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Thanks so much.
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You have a real talent!
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Thank you.
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“I’ll never tell you how my name never sounded the same after she said it.” Very nice.
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Thanks!
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This was great! Im new to this, and this is the first one i read.
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Wow! I’m honored. Thank you.
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Reblogged this on wanderingkiddo and commented:
moving and touching… relatable
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This is raw, vulnerable, and beautiful. Thank you for sharing with all of us.. its crazy how these life experiences make us all unique while at the same time connect us.
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Different to a degree and yet the same.
Thank you.
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I love this. After reading, this is or what I’ve felt for years for a certain someone. I love how real and deep this entry is. I almost feel as if you wrote this just so I could stumble upon this and read it. I’m going to read the rest of your work. Good Job!
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Wow.
Thank you so much for that.
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You are very welcome. I’m excited to read more of your work. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Zak's Book Talk and commented:
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this is beautiful. truly beautiful and incredibly moving. it’s all so real, and i can feel the pain in your writing, clearly haunted by that certain someone. wonderful writing! kudos to you x
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And thank you for reading and the comment.
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you’re welcome. it’s a great piece of writing. so real.
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I love this!!!
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Thanks for the love.
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Moving nHeart touching one
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Thank you so much.
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Great piece, congratulations! Nevertheless, I think that often “telling” has a beautiful effect 🙂
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Thank you.
Yes, there is release when you talk about what you have experienced. It helps.
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Reblogged this on A Peek Inside and commented:
When you read something and a picture of someone pops up into your head…
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you have a way with words. you make it relatable.. heartfelt..
absolutely amazing
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Wow!
Thank you so much for the compliment.
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That was great.
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Thank you!
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I’ll never show how the ballads and lullabies turned into dirges and elegies.
This would be a great first or second line in a novel.
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Guess it does have the potential.
Thanks.
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It’s like your feelings flowed out into words, congrats!
I’m sure we can all relate to this and I can assure you, you will feel love like this again, we all will, good luck!
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Thank you for the assurance.
And good luck to you too!
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Reblogged this on outofthebackground and commented:
Wow.
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Ang galing. o.o So glad I read this. 🙂
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Salamat sa pag-basa.
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This is very powerful and I can relate I hope that it all works for you someday
btw once again its an amazing post.
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Thank you so much for that.
I hope so too.
And may it work out for you too.
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It always works out, some time for the best some times for the worst, I once asked someone how to be happy they told me, learn to empty your heart of hate, took me months to even get the basics of that concept but it has helped me a lot.
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That’s good advice, albeit quite difficult.
I understand why it took you awhile. If I did the same, I too would take a while.
Glad that you’re better.
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deeply felt…thank you for sharing!
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And thank you for reading.
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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Something tells me this isn’t all prompt.
I can relate.
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Maybe.
Re: relate: cool. Glad you can.
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this was really beautiful. thank you for sharing this!
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on firstimeblogger.
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I had to stop reading the entry towards the end, then I picked up where I left off a few moments later. The last stanza’s hit a bit too close to home for me. I thank you for sharing this
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Hope it wasn’t too bad.
Thanks for reading and the comment.
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gasp
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Thanks!
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Awwwwwwwww. This is such a beautiful poem. It makes me sad, I feel like you wrote that for me. 😦
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Thank you for the compliment.
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Haunting and beautiful – and I relate to it on every level. It brought tears to my eyes, and struck at the chord of my own soul.
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I’m still surprised by how this affects people.
Thank you.
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Touching … How many girls wished a man felt this deeply about them
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Thanks.
I guess there would be a lot.
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This echoes my own feelings. However, even in a million years I could not express them so beautifully. Very intense, very touching. I wish you with all the love, joy and happiness ever.
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Wow. Thanks so much for that!
Likewise to you.
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Reblogged this on a new day and commented:
Liked it very much!;c
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You got my heart stop beating. Lordie, but this is awesome! 🙂
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Hope you’re still okay.
Thank you!
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Awesome
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Thanks!
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OMG, WOW xinfinite!!!! You my friend, just made my day… I know this is supposed to be a painful poem, but I am sharing it to everyone I know… Keep writing more poems… please! Again, you made my day… 😀
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Glad to have made your day.
I shall do my best to write.
Thank you.
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This is seriously so beautiful.
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Thank you so much.
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Very moving !!
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Thanks!
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I hope she reads this.
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Anything about me is the least of her concerns.
So I really doubt that she would.
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This is heart-breaking.
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Indeed it is.
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I don’t a lot about my Loverly either. In fact, there is a lot of things my blog readers do not know about my relationship.
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Well, I believe that it your personal discretion to write or not about something that personal.
Of course, if you want to write it without giving away much (or hinting that it is), there are ways.
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I do that-I use poetry as a way to hint around what’s going on.
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The good old, “Let’s be friends?” Am thinking this caught the eye of the gang at WordPress. Well done!
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Not worded like that but yes, that’s what she wanted.
Frankly, I tried figuring out what makes the any article click for inclusion to the Freshly Pressed board but there’s no definitive answer.
Anyway, thanks!
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This is very sad, I am sorry.
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Thank you/
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I’m not sure if this is fiction or if it’s an experience you’ve had but you expressed your inner most feeling on a very painful subject: breaking up so well. I enjoyed your writing very much. Excellent entry for the prompt.
Isadora
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It’s a real experience.
Thank you so much for the compliment!
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So beautiful and so sad
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Thanks so much.
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Beautifully written! And sorry about the girl!
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on Messy Little Raindrops.
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Reblogged this on Free psychology and commented:
This moves you
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Reblogged this on The Story of a Guy.
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Lovely and heart wrenching. Nicely done!
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Thanks so much!
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wow! so bloody well written! it takes strength to get your emotions out this way. brilliant!
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Thank you so much!
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What do I think? I think it’s a masterpiece.
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Thanks so much for that.
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Reblogged this on Love Mekanism and commented:
A stunningly beautiful work… a masterpiece. Thank you for sharing so freely.
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you hit a universal note – I will never tell those things either, but not quite as beautifully as you will never tell
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on huwagMOKONGtitigan and commented:
I will never tell.
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I have just stumbled across this, what can I say that 311 responses have not already covered? Truly beautifully written, reaches the heart and soul and left me silently contemplating for a very long time after reading.
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Thank you so much for finding it so.
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i just stumbled upon this today…its so nice and sad at the same time…i don’t think i could ever express myself that well. on a side note: the lrt cheered me up.
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Thank you so much for the compliment.
Glad it did! You’re an OFW? Immigrant?
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Nope! Wish I was but I’m in the Phils too. Used to ride the lrt back in college 🙂 and I’ve read your Mexicali post. Didn’t like it too. You should try Agave’s.
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Usually I get that from people who’re now in some other country.
Knew it! I was right to take that stand with their food. Thanks for the recommendation.
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This was so beautifully written! Wow!
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Thank you so much!
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I will never be able to use the right words to describe what you made me feel 🙂 wonderful. Thanks
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Thank you so much!
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I love this poem and how you played with the words. I would have loved to see the letter even though I know it is personal. But it is very relateable I can really feel your pain.
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Thank you so much.
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Reblogged this on The Seeker and commented:
Mati, So glad to hear from you and I have been meaning to reblog your winning post so that I have in on file. Keep on writing. Take Care, Tita.
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Wow! Cool. Salamat po.
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I am so proud of you, Mati. I have to show this to the kids so they will be encourage to write. Keep up the good work. You are most welcome.
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I’ll do my best to continue.
You’re a teacher?! Wow.
I really wish the best for your kids.
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Salamat po.
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Wow, breathtaking, beautiful and emotional. I adore this piece.
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Thank you so much.
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You are more than welcome, it was raw and real. Without that level of emotion there could be no amazing and powerful poetry, stories, photographs so I guess just keep using what comes right from your heart to create. A gem of a read.
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I’ll do my best! Thanks so much for the compliment.
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Reblogged this on The numpty with a camera and commented:
Well, I don’t do many reblogs but this poem did really make me catch my breath and the rest of the blog is not half bad either.
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Oh! this broke my heart. Lovely write up.
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Thank you so much!
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I’ll never tell you about the effect your words had. Sincere and heartfelt.
Thanks for visiting. Please come back.
Judy
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Thank you Judy.
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